This is your first sonnet. Thanks, I'm so pleased with it. Of course you gotta read more about iambic, trochaic, scansions, the volta or shift when you reach the last 6 lines, the ending couplet, slant and full rhymes and stuff like that. So take this opportunity. There are lots of great sonnets being posted here (Peter's, DannyR's, Sin's, to name a few). Or go read clics. You've taken off bro, maintain your course, explore.
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