Wednesday, August 17, 2011

A sonnet I hope? c/c...Yesu Ben you asked?

This is your first sonnet. Thanks, I'm so pleased with it. Of course you gotta read more about iambic, trochaic, scansions, the volta or shift when you reach the last 6 lines, the ending couplet, slant and full rhymes and stuff like that. So take this opportunity. There are lots of great sonnets being posted here (Peter's, DannyR's, Sin's, to name a few). Or go read clics. You've taken off bro, maintain your course, explore.

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